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Score: 8
Raid Gaza!

"Hah"

submission: Raid Gaza!
date: January 24, 2009

It's compelling how you capture this situation and condensed it down to a simple game with cute music and graphics. Im sure most will agree that as an actual game it falls short, but I think its a success as it gets the message across.

Also good job on citing the source at the end.

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Score: 8
Zone of the Awesome

"lololol"

date: January 20, 2009

Animation was fine and well tributed to Egoraptors style. The voice acting was fine, perhaps give ADA a filter.

ZoE was parodied well so it was fun to watch, Silly mech design.. check Kojima trolling games... check ... Leo being a whiney bitch check.

Only problem, make it longer. It was shorter than ZoE.. and thats saying something! (lololol)

January 20, 2009

Author's Response:

ROFL

Wow...that IS.

I'll keep you posted on any progress continuing this when it's left off. I don't think it'll be a flash, but instead, a Newgrounds exclusive web-comic, with occasional animated segments.

But for right now, the next great adventure is collaborating and knocking out an original solo project! Thanks for taking the time to review this, man!

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Score: 7
WW III

"Funny"

submission: WW III
date: April 18, 2008

Despite the presentation I didnt mind cycling through the countries.
The music works well too.

April 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Fuck you. The presentation is AWESOME.

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Score: 5
Tutorial On Rs Mellee Up

"Set accross poorly"

date: April 14, 2008

Pro: Your tutorial does have the information to create a dress up game. If I was unaware on how to make one this tutorial would help me create it.

Con: I am unaware of why you decided to use such a small dimension for your flash size, since it is quite small all the text and demonstrations are squeezed in. This looks unattractive and makes the information hard to read.

Also you never explain any of the actionscript involved. Although the actionscript is correct, a person may not know what the actionscript is actually telling them and so they cannot apply this knowledge to other things.

The music is not exactly appropriate for a tutorial. Use gentle music rather than rock.

Also this tutorial has been done countless times.

April 14, 2008

Author's Response:

thx for the reveiw. I pick a small size because it looked better than it would have bigger..

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Score: 9
Heavy&Medic:HappyTogether

"Funny"

date: February 12, 2008

Nice concept, I too love the medic and heavy combination. Such a great couple.

Ending was perfect.

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Score: 7
Global Warming?

"Goofy"

submission: Global Warming?
date: December 20, 2007

Song was stupid, character was silly. I laughed at this nonsense.

In a good way though.

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Score: 9
Requiem for the Damned

"I like it."

date: December 12, 2007

Its rare to see flashes like this on Newgrounds anymore. I can see a lot of time was put in making this, the graphics are smooth and the animation is smooth. The sound is great as well as the story is quite unique and had me laughing at parts.

You are definately getting a 5.

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Score: 3
Needs Moar Yiff

"Not Entertaining."

submission: Needs Moar Yiff
date: October 28, 2007

'Catchy' song with a few frames on repeat does not justify as entertainment to me, nor a flash animation.

October 28, 2007

Author's Response:

Nah, it's just a loop really. Nothing worthy but I said I'd make something for it and I told him it'd be something weird like this.

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Score: 5
Lolicon

"It promised so much."

submission: Lolicon
date: October 6, 2007

but delivered so little. No I am kidding, it was insightful.

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Score: 7
Metal Gear Yotsuba

"Great"

submission: Metal Gear Yotsuba
date: August 21, 2007

Ive seen this elsewhere on the net before, I laughed then and I still laugh now. Metal Gear Solid and Yotsuba, two awesomes combined. Who knew such a pair could go so well together. Hope to see more of your work, especially if its yotsuba related.

August 21, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kindness. Some of my friends have told me that they've caught this animation on 4chan a couple of times. I've even tripped over it on YouTube once. I'm glad there are fellow Yotsuba fans who appreciate! It's good knowing I'm not alone.

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